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Old 11-05-2006, 11:52 AM   #1
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I am alway told to face my fears
but i also hear
that that's no cure
and that the only true thing to fear
is what's in the mirror...

i steer for the clear
as i live this fear of excepting my peers
and haveing a couple beers;

but no.. that's not me
that's not the person i see
nor what i seek to be
and so i plee, this decree

i just want to fit in
with out the sin

of loseing my innocents
i've just been conviense

that i don't amount to anything in the end
but i am going to show that im not pined
why pretend
i will Win ..

i will see a hero standing tall; never to fall
the man who makes all the calls

when i look in the mirror i want see me
and that is what i will amount to be!!!
-by Jonathan Norman

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Old 11-05-2006, 12:54 PM   #2
 
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NICE!!
I like it.
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Your poem Sin is a lot better, you should post that one.
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That poem deserves a Wow. You're really creative and your poem definitely describes what alot of us are feeling, being our age in this time and dealing with the pressures.
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