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Old 12-06-2006, 02:45 AM   #1
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new story.. been abot time since i wrote one.. kinda based on a true story too. :]


Chapter 1

My life in Chicago was perfect. I never got in trouble, did well in school, and had the bestest friends a girl could ever ask for. I could laugh with them. They always made me cheer up when I was sad. I mean, they were my life!! Then my dad just plain ruins it all!! He just lays the big M word on EVERYTHING!!

"We're moving?!?!"


Chapter 2

That's it. My life is officially over! I am never going to trust my parents again!! Why would they do this to me?!?! I mean, this is my LIFE!! Right?? WRONG.

"I just got a new job." My dad says. "The company is in Atlanta, so we all are going to have to move there."

"Ewwww Georgia?? You mean I have to be all like HEY YALL and talk in a southern accent?! Forget it!!" I yell.

Moving means:
new school
new house
new friends
and new band program
and NEW BOYS!!! (WOOTTT)

I love band. It's my life. I just cant go to a new school. I love band here in Chicago. I just cant!!

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Old 12-06-2006, 09:53 PM   #2
 
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I wish I lived in Chicago. Good story so far.
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Old 12-09-2006, 10:09 PM   #3
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I like this story, keep writing.
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Interesting.
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Well good story
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Old 02-20-2007, 12:08 AM   #7
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Wherever you go, there you are. Say you grew up in Atlanta and all of the sudden you had to move to Chicago. You would absolutely hate having to go from that good ol' southern hospitality to a cold and bustling windy city.

But you'll find friends wherever you go. You'll find things you like wherever you go. It's all about having an open mind and letting things in--getting used to them. Because if you do, then you'll never want to live without some of them again and it will be worth all the initial discomfort.

But hey, you can never know happiness without first knowing unhappiness. And the discomfort of having to move caused you to write what you did, so that's at least one good thing from an apparent bad thing. Discontent forces us to act, so keep writing and maybe you'll find more good in things and places you'd never expect.
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nice story!
i like it.... lol
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i know how hard it is when your used to being a great write then if is like you can't write any more. i have spent the last two years trying everythin in my power to write again and nothing is as good as it once was so all you can do is wait..... htat story wasn't bad though good jod{ i wasn't trying to make it sound like your stroy was bad i like it>.<}
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Old 03-17-2007, 07:26 AM   #10
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P.S. i have never moved but i can only imagne how hard it is>.< srry
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