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Old 11-28-2006, 01:04 AM   #1
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Like the shifting winds, I change who I am, with no memory of who I once was. I enjoy the game, that chaos brings, with no worries of who is above. Such horrors my eyes have comitted, Such sins that only my mind knows, But that was all in the past now, so we shall let it go.

Now I am a new man, what rules shall the new me bring. Shall I sit back and enjoy myself more, or work harder being the true me. What ever the out come, the dice have been thrown and the number is a double three. Chaos will rise yet order will strive to bring everything to its knees.

My life has been changed forever, I have chosen my road to take. And unlike in the dream world, I can't simply wake from a mistake. Have I haulted Destany, or will the fates deside, that just like he before me. My friends will lose there lives.

The path has been set before me, I chose it with my own two hands, And for the first time in my simple life, against darkness I shall take a take a firm stand. Do I welcome my own death, through my very door? Even if I do, I doubt I care anymore.

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Old 11-28-2006, 10:54 AM   #2
 
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Nice one!

My life has been changed forever, I have chosen my road to take.

^^^ that's my fave line.
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Old 11-29-2006, 01:39 AM   #3
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"And unlike in the dream world, I can't simply wake from a mistake."

That's my favorite line, it's touching. I love it, you're really good. Keep up the good work.
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